Replace These Words In Your Writing
We use a complicated or “smart-sounding” word when a simpler word would work better. New York Times editor Dan Saltzstein lists some great examples on Twitter. They pop up in news media, but also in “business speak.” If you’re trying to write effectively, watch out for these:
Twitter users suggest many more:
Opens & bows (@taffyakner)
Opens & debuts (@lhsaria)
Die & perish (@danfalk)
Killed & slain (@TheAliciaKraft)
Let & enable (@VictoriaMia)
Many & myriad (@brookehauser)
Lessons & learnings (@mathowie)
A question & an ask (@mathowie)
Live & reside (@EmilyRNunn)
Tweeted & took to Twitter (@KOD)
Write & author (@CvlKulow)
Write & pen (@SteveKandell)
Sign & ink (@danloving)
Story & narrative (@bedhatuser)
Planned & preplanned (@bigdaddydoug56)
Before & prior to (@LindaIHiggins)
After & subsequent to (@LindaIHiggins)
Now & at this point in time (@dopre)
How & the ways in which (@zumhagenyekple)
Scheduled & slated (@NeilMathur)
Snow & the white stuff (@NBCLAamy)
Use & leverage (@traceylindeman)
Affect & impact (@roboso)
Next & going forward (@robertdfield)
Encourage & incentivise (@JVSylvester)
Eat & tuck into (@amandafortini)
Drink & quaff (@ianfreeman)
Shot & gunned down (@RSDavis5)
Fire & blaze (@AdamButler__)
Large & sprawling (@ronlieber)
Person & individual (@AmyZQuinn)
Money & funds (@AmyZQuinn)
Gives & gifts (@jby789)
Drink & libation (@lilabattis)
Cocktail & tipple (@dgritzer)
Food & fare (@daniellemattoon)
Put on & donned (@daniellemattoon)
Custom & bespoke (@SusanOrr)
Hair & tresses (@HuffinesJayna)
Dress & frock (@vonverena)
Pregnant & anything with “baby bump” (@dreegreene)
Criticised & slammed (@CarolineHaubold)
Directed & helmed (@johndeedesign)
Impressive & epic (@clairenelson)
Road & roadway (@SeanMoodyKSL)
Has & boasts (@Andy_Murdock)
Help & facilitate (@shellbomber)
On & upon (@Tellythecairn)
We’d like to add:
Name & dub
Turn & render
Big & massive
Maybe & perhaps
These aren’t rules, of course; they’re just suggestions, language is fluid, yadda yadda. Almost all the “lesser” words above have good uses. Save them for those uses. To leverage something is specifically to “use it to its maximum advantage.” Something sprawling is “spreading out over a large area in an untidy or irregular way.” Suits are bespoke, and medieval knights get slain. OK, you’ve been waiting to add your own—go for it.